aug 16 - rest in piece
dear avril lavigne,
i'm a little bothered by two lines of your song, when you're gone, which are 'they smell just like you' and the line following immediately:'i love the things that you do'. it's disconnected. it drives me crazy because ??? what do you mean? does 'they smell just like you' secretly translates into 'you like to participate in action-y stuffs and thus sweat a lot' leading to 'i love the things that you do?' do they? DO THEY? i'm thinking if i were to submit it to a teacher as a poetry-writing-thingie i'd get a c on account of "discontinuation". if i could have an answer i would rest in peace, and concentrate on other things bothering me that are a little bit bigger than worrying about lines from a song(another songlines-ish concern of mine is that elliot yamin's song seems to be from a woman-beater).
hey, hey, you, you, i don't like how those two lines are disconnected,
connect-the-dots-y-neri.
ps: i must be nervous about writing to you because initially i spelled peace-pieces, dot-dotes and because-becayse, and initially-initally. rest in piece, ha-ha! like you would beat me up to pieces after answering! which... uhh, you wouldn't, right?